New Media Workshop

Text Editor, Margaret. For general stuff.
Hi Vincent,
Here are my text edits for your story - marked to show edits. Feel free to use what you’d like.
Margaret
(Aiyahenator)
Text Editor, Margaret. Specially for the interview with Sung Po Wa on page 2.
Here you go Vincent! Suggested edits attached.
Margaret
(Texts changed according to the text files attached, as suggested)
Hey Vincent, really enjoyed your pictures. thanks for not using multimedia at all :)
Cheers,
Sun Jie
Hi Vincent,
Here are my two cents.
1. “Why or why not live in halls at HKU?”
I think you can consider moving the trophy photo near the beginning of the article. So reader can be clear on who this interview is about, thus become more interested in reading it further. Perhaps before the question: “I see, so what are your objectives then, as Cultural Secretary of your hall?”
The committee photo can move a little bit further down, near the end.
The caption looks a little out of place at the moment. Would you like to try using the caption function?
2. Hall Life Photos
I really enjoy the photos you’ve got on the last few pages. I think they will look more attractive if you have a format for the pages. At the moment, they are a little all over the place.
One suggestion is to make them aligned to one side. Or you may consider making a slideshow at the end of the paragraph.
Hope this help.
Cheers,
Hilda
(I changed according to the suggestions Hilda made in the first section, but not the second. I don’t think putting every aligned to one side is a nice idea, cause it does not seem to be more interesting, and a slideshow would be more ‘detached’ and less impressive than viewing all photos at the same time)